When my time comes

April 16, 2009
When my time comes,
Let me go in peace.
Leave me as I am,
And do not try to save me.
Let them take me away,
For this is what i want.
Do not cry for me,
Because I am in a peaceful place.
Remember me for who I was,
And love me even though I'm gone.
Never forget me,
Because my presence is still in your hearts.
My life has ended,
But yours must not.
Do not take it,
Because I'm not completely gone.
Remember that I loved you,
And know I always will.

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~Jaguarbby~ said...
Jul. 3, 2009 at 6:49 pm
Very good...this one is cool..btw,thx for the comment
camille_1441 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 6:39 pm
This is a really meaningful piece about letting your own death be a celebrartion and continuation of the lives you touched. Keep writing and thanks for the comment! =)
324oyr said...
May 9, 2009 at 2:59 am
I like this one I wish I wrote it
*Stalker* said...
May 7, 2009 at 4:29 am
your work is amazing.
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