When my time comes

April 16, 2009
By xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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When my time comes,
Let me go in peace.
Leave me as I am,
And do not try to save me.
Let them take me away,
For this is what i want.
Do not cry for me,
Because I am in a peaceful place.
Remember me for who I was,
And love me even though I'm gone.
Never forget me,
Because my presence is still in your hearts.
My life has ended,
But yours must not.
Do not take it,
Because I'm not completely gone.
Remember that I loved you,
And know I always will.


The author's comments:
I know this poem isn't that good, but please comment on it anyways, even if you are criticizing it. And thank you if you do criticize it, because it helps me see what I need to improve on :)

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on Jul. 3 2009 at 6:49 pm
karabear SILVER, Westland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
No joke!

Very good...this one is cool..btw,thx for the comment

on Jul. 2 2009 at 6:39 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
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This is a really meaningful piece about letting your own death be a celebrartion and continuation of the lives you touched. Keep writing and thanks for the comment! =)

on May. 9 2009 at 2:59 am
vueberroth DIAMOND, Lanising, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
We wright our own storys
-Arthur Ueberroth

I like this one I wish I wrote it

*Stalker* said...
on May. 7 2009 at 4:29 am
your work is amazing.


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