my dove

April 16, 2009
By Whittney GOLD, Somewhere, Kentucky
Whittney GOLD, Somewhere, Kentucky
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone is beautiful just the way they are, and everyone is talented at something!"


They say the symbol for love
is a pretty white dove
While you say to yourself who loves me
I wonder who it could be
But have you taken some time
to see you could be mine
For I will always be by your side
even through thr worst night
You are my true love
so will you be my dove


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on Aug. 19 2009 at 8:51 pm
Robsessed PLATINUM, McKinney, Texas
36 articles 14 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I may be changed by what happens to me, but I refuse to be reduced by it." - Maya Angelou

"Did you know 'I told you so' has a brother, Jacob?" she asked cutting me off. "His name is 'Shut the hell up.'" - Bella Swan, Breaking Dawn

I enjoyed the "idea" of your poem. I loved how you ended it with the "so you will be my dove." Good job, but I wish it was longer.

on Jul. 2 2009 at 12:02 am
TheCinders PLATINUM, Kentwood, Michigan
28 articles 1 photo 22 comments
Um...I think you could definitely improve by not being so safe and writing about pretty doves and love. Write about something deep and meaningful! Things that people have never even thought of before! Dive Deep!

on Jul. 1 2009 at 2:37 pm
lexi10824 PLATINUM, Portalnd, Oregon
25 articles 2 photos 69 comments
I love this poem. You are really good. You made the rhyming seem effortless and yet complex at the same time. :) Keep writing.




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