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They say the symbol for love
is a pretty white dove
While you say to yourself who loves me
I wonder who it could be
But have you taken some time
to see you could be mine
For I will always be by your side
even through thr worst night
You are my true love
so will you be my dove




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Robsessed said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 8:51 pm:
I enjoyed the "idea" of your poem. I loved how you ended it with the "so you will be my dove." Good job, but I wish it was longer.
 
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Bria S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 2, 2009 at 12:02 am:
Um...I think you could definitely improve by not being so safe and writing about pretty doves and love. Write about something deep and meaningful! Things that people have never even thought of before! Dive Deep!
 
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lexi10824 said...
Jul. 1, 2009 at 2:37 pm:
I love this poem. You are really good. You made the rhyming seem effortless and yet complex at the same time. :) Keep writing.
 
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