the win, the din, and the end

April 21, 2009
By Felix SILVER, N/A, New Jersey
Felix SILVER, N/A, New Jersey
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ahhhhh.......sad that others cant feel what i feel,
dream what i dream;
if i were to make a deal,
it would seem,
i would lose and they would win,
and through that emerging din,
i would be blithe in spirit,
and see it as something fair to wit
that i give it rest
it wouldn't contest
for long have i lived and won
though time declared me done
it would be fair that my lessons learned
what i give and what i keep is earned

' reap what you sow '


The author's comments:
rhyme scheme is
a
b
a
b
c
c
d
d
e
e
f
f
g
g
i do dislike rhyme schemes that go
'abab' but i started it that way so i kept it. anyway its old, never decided whether to post it up or not, even now im kinda of combating the urge to delete it off screen and 'x' out the window....its not that i dont feel its good, its just how it is....
anyway as usual, i hope you get something from this.

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