Hope

April 20, 2009
By dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
14 articles 1 photo 32 comments

There was one bird, you,
Then two
When hope came.
Time passed, hope left,
And so did you.
I waited alone.
Hope came, and went.
Never staying for long.
But now
You say you may return.
The hope bird has come back.
I am not alone anymore.
I realize that I never was.
I felt sad without you
But now you come with hopeful news.
So I wait with hope
consuming me
and wait
for you
to fly back to me.

The author's comments:
Dedicated to A.

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 3:19 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
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Thanks! :)

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on Aug. 1 2010 at 1:40 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

i love it, and the ending. 5/5

on Jul. 27 2010 at 9:16 am
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Again, this was very sweet, and I also love the ending, this describes how I felt perfectly--except my best friend didn't come back. :(

on Apr. 25 2010 at 1:53 pm
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
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Yeah. :) Thanks again!

on Apr. 22 2010 at 9:24 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

oh i think 'pensive' would be a better word? idk u get the picture

on Apr. 22 2010 at 9:22 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

that made me all thoughtful! i love the ending!!




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