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There was one bird, you,
Then two
When hope came.
Time passed, hope left,
And so did you.
I waited alone.
Hope came, and went.
Never staying for long.
But now
You say you may return.
The hope bird has come back.
I am not alone anymore.
I realize that I never was.
I felt sad without you
But now you come with hopeful news.
So I wait with hope
consuming me
and wait
for you
to fly back to me.





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_Elsy_ said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 1:40 pm
i love it, and the ending. 5/5
 
dreamer replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 3:19 pm
Thanks! :)
 
gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 9:16 am
Again, this was very sweet, and I also love the ending, this describes how I felt perfectly--except my best friend didn't come back. :(
 
jonas_chick899 said...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 9:22 pm
that made me all thoughtful! i love the ending!!
 
jonas_chick899 replied...
Apr. 22, 2010 at 9:24 pm
oh i think 'pensive' would be a better word? idk u get the picture
 
dreamer replied...
Apr. 25, 2010 at 1:53 pm
Yeah. :) Thanks again!
 
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