sping days

April 16, 2009
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stillness, everything is still here.
quiet, only the birds can be heard.
ripples, the breeze moves the water
wind, moves the page i write on.
sun, shines bright and casts shadows.
the stillness ends.
the quit ends.
the ripples sieze.
the sun sets.
another day ends,
the night begins,
then the night ends.
another day begins,
we've gone full circle,
around again we go.

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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 27, 2009 at 6:34 pm
I really like this! You take us in a full circle, and the images are beautiful. Keep writing (:

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krzykrys replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 7:49 pm
thanks for the support!
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