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The Line I'm Drawing

He's running through my mind
Stepping over the line
Between his space and mine
Flirting with devastated and just fine.
I want you fully gone
I was stupid, I was wrong.
Stay out of my head
And far away from my heart
I think that an apology
Would be a nice way to start.
Stop invading my past
Don't ruin my future
Slipping into my life so fast
That I never can be too sure
If I'm safe from these feelings
Or if it's just false security
If "we" will ever have meaning
Or if i'm broken indefinitely.




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Yvonne32 said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 4:03 pm:
This is very good! I love how almost anyone can relate to this poem, because it's so true! Keep it up!
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 13, 2009 at 7:46 pm:
wow :) i also like the rhyming a lot, but u can relate to everything you wrote about. i can feel all your emotion. very well written...bravo! check out some of my work and leave comments, i love the feedback. 4 stars for this one :)
 
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YeseniaG said...
May 13, 2009 at 2:17 pm:
Love the rhyming scheme. I'm really feeling this poem :]
 
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