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April 15, 2009
By gymnastjcb SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
gymnastjcb SILVER, Wheeling, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness depends upon ourselves.
Aristotle


Her bony fingers
entwined in mine,
I give her a squeeze
and look her in the eye.
Staring through my tears,
I face her fogged gaze.
She never thought I'd tell her
she needs to change her ways.
Squeezing my eyes tight,
a tear runs down my cheek.
She squeezes my hand back,
her hold somewhat weak.
Now all I do is pray
and thirst and wish and hope.
My palms are getting callused
so I let go of the rope.
My eyes shift to the side
to her bag lightly packed.
And I pray today will be the day
I get my sister back.



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on Jun. 1 2010 at 10:50 pm
hannahlouise15, Thorntown, Indiana
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speechless is how this left me

on Jun. 1 2010 at 9:46 pm
TheSummoningFreak PLATINUM, Lugoff, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
if you can never let yourself fall you'll never know what it's like to love

i love this. it's so good i started crying

well done and beautifully written


on Jun. 1 2010 at 6:55 am
AndTheVinesSpin GOLD, Romulus, Michigan
11 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is the Movement" -TWLOHA
"Love is our weapon." -Christofer Drew
"I'ma get me a High School Diploma, even if I gotta steal one!" -ThisKidInMyMathClassLol

Dude, you have no Idea how well I relate to this... I'm touched to the point of tears

on Dec. 13 2009 at 6:30 pm
scarletP SILVER, East Lansing, Michigan
8 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A smart girl listens but doesn't believe, kisses but doesn't love and leaves before she is left."
-- Marilyn Monroe

amazingly written...made me think and i have got to say, u brought tears to my eyes. wonderful.

on Dec. 8 2009 at 11:15 am
soinlove SILVER, Parish, New York
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omg this is soo good it gave me goose bomps!!! this is awesome. so much emoation in it. nice pic beside it too. good job

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on Dec. 6 2009 at 12:43 pm
dani09 BRONZE, Winchester, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart, and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words

this was really good, the last line, was what took my breath away, awesome work. you have a talent! :)

on Dec. 5 2009 at 9:04 pm
Ricepaddy BRONZE, Menifee, California
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"When you dream, everything becomes possible. So when you reach the top of the mountain, you keep going." ~ Chad Eastham

Nice, I enjoyed the way you kept the meaning of the poem a secret till the end so we would continue to read it. You write well. Keep it up! :)

on Dec. 3 2009 at 9:54 am
Kortny_Mae GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not short!...I'm fun sized!!!!!"

this is really touching...ur a really good writer and i hope u write more:)




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