Come Back This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

April 15, 2009
Her bony fingers
entwined in mine,
I give her a squeeze
and look her in the eye.
Staring through my tears,
I face her fogged gaze.
She never thought I'd tell her
she needs to change her ways.
Squeezing my eyes tight,
a tear runs down my cheek.
She squeezes my hand back,
her hold somewhat weak.
Now all I do is pray
and thirst and wish and hope.
My palms are getting callused
so I let go of the rope.
My eyes shift to the side
to her bag lightly packed.
And I pray today will be the day
I get my sister back.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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hannahlouise15 said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 10:50 pm
speechless is how this left me
TheSummoningFreak said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 9:46 pm

i love this. it's so good i started crying

well done and beautifully written

AndTheVinesSpin said...
Jun. 1, 2010 at 6:55 am
Dude, you have no Idea how well I relate to this... I'm touched to the point of tears
scarletP said...
Dec. 13, 2009 at 6:30 pm
amazingly written...made me think and i have got to say, u brought tears to my eyes. wonderful.
lovehurts said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 11:15 am
omg this is soo good it gave me goose bomps!!! this is awesome. so much emoation in it. nice pic beside it too. good job
danika said...
Dec. 6, 2009 at 12:43 pm
this was really good, the last line, was what took my breath away, awesome work. you have a talent! :)
Siren said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 9:04 pm
Nice, I enjoyed the way you kept the meaning of the poem a secret till the end so we would continue to read it. You write well. Keep it up! :)
Your_lil_Secret said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 9:54 am
this is really touching...ur a really good writer and i hope u write more:)
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