Heartbeats

April 15, 2009
By Jonesy BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
Jonesy BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
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Some people count the day or hours or time that goes by as they miss their loved ones.

Some will even count the minutes or seconds.

Maybe the deeper or passionate ones will count the clouds that pass or each star in the sky.

Well that’s not me, even though you're always on my mind I don’t count the second I miss you.

I count each heartbeat that you’re not there.

I count each breathe I take and it’s not talking to you.

I count each step I take and wishing you were beside me.

I count each thought I have about you.

I count each time I blink, hoping when I open my eyes you are in front of me.

I count each waking moment you aren't at my side.

I miss you and I will love you till the end of time.

The author's comments:
This is actually the second love poem I have ever wrote and first thing I have put on this site. Comment if you can. I wrote this poem about my feelings for my girlfriend

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Jonesy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 1 2009 at 1:26 am
Jonesy BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
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thank you guys so much for the comments. i really didnt think my poem was this good. thanks, it all means a lot

Kaiya SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2009 at 5:38 pm
Kaiya SILVER, Middleburry, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"My duty is to my Heart"-Mulan

i loved it so much i wanted to cry i love your poem dont let things get in the way of what your heart feels.

MissMe said...
on Jun. 1 2009 at 9:46 pm
hey, this is really good. keep writing, you've got a talent

on May. 5 2009 at 10:34 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

This poem took my breath away. Its amazing and passionate and i don't even know what else to say about it. For a fist poem you're off to a good start. No wait...a REALLY good start!

Carry_Me said...
on May. 4 2009 at 10:06 pm
I really like this poem! To me it sounds like the beginning of a great poet. And it sounds a lot better than some of the stuff they actual publish. You should be in the magazine. Good Work :)

Jonesy BRONZE said...
on May. 4 2009 at 9:55 pm
Jonesy BRONZE, Brownsburg, Indiana
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BEST POEM EVER


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