If you would be so kind

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If you would be so kind
To lend me your time
I think Im falling for you

Many say it wont work
others say other words
Just ignore it all

You are incredible
out of the ordinary
unbelievable to me

Whatever you ask me
I shall give you an answer
Let me know your thoughts
Leave nothing out

Lonliness is gone
everything is filled
again I am happy
virtually invincible, in
every way possible

my thoughts wander
everything feels complete





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MariaMarie This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 4:08 pm
Wow- not only do i love the image it gives, but the hidden message is creative and well.. fantastic! I think even better is: first message , you; it's telling how he is. The 2nd, will; It's talks of how you will do anything he asks or wants- like it's your will to do that for him. 3rd, leave; It'll give the exact opposite feeling of what's described in the stanza. 4th, me; It tells about you[me] . I don't think i ever could have done that 8) It's awesome!
 
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