View of Love, of the Unloved

April 13, 2009
It sounds so foreign
But so familiar
It’s normal to everyone else
But not to me
It seems to emancipate
But I’m still bound
It seems so easy
But I just don’t know how





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sallyloco said...
Jun. 17, 2009 at 11:34 pm
aHmAzInG!
 
amyxu said...
Jun. 5, 2009 at 7:13 pm
If not for the title/your note, I wouldn't know it was about love. I was kind of expecting to learn what "it" was in the last line (because a lot of poems do that at the very end) but the revelation wasn't there. I liked the deep thoughts put into it, though.
 
READ*WRITE*LOVE*GREEN said...
May 20, 2009 at 10:38 pm
AMAZING! Short, sweet, and an entirely new take on love! I love this poem, it has a nice rhythm to it, and is very beautiful.
 
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