I love You

April 13, 2009
By crickets_song BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
crickets_song BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Waiting, Always difficult
More so since he’s fading
Slowly, Quickly time runs together.
I love you

Like water, evaporating without a trace
He didn’t know me, I’m beyond recognition to him
I love you

He’s already gone, so quick I couldn’t say good bye
I’m lost, I’m a puppy in a strange world
I walk, talk, eat; but not consciously
It’s like living in water, slow, sad.
I love you

“I love you”, three little words
Yet I came unhinged
Sobbing, waiting for my daddy

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on Feb. 17 2010 at 1:26 pm
biggerinfinities SILVER, Superior, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
“We accept the love we think we deserve.”
― Stephen Chbosky, The Perks of Being a Wallflower

wow! i love the comparasin with water

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