The affect you have on me.

April 24, 2009
By Jewels SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
Jewels SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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By walking into a room you make me smile.
I want your love so much; I’d walk a billion miles.
As soon as I see your face and my pain is
.
Lying in my bed, picture of you fill my head.
When I hear your name I go feeble in the knees.
This affect you have on me proves that you are the one for me.



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on May. 3 2009 at 4:15 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

I don't even know what to say! Wow. I have sooo felt like that before. Amazing poem

on May. 2 2009 at 4:25 pm
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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good poem check out mines:

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joy26 said...
on May. 1 2009 at 9:59 pm
the affect or the effect?

interesting poem though :)

IRBFGW DIAMOND said...
on May. 1 2009 at 9:13 pm
IRBFGW DIAMOND, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Hey, assbutt!" Supernatural, Castiel.

Aw, i love this! There is so much emotion in it, showing the ups and downs of feelings of love. Its wonderful, passionate and honest.

on Apr. 30 2009 at 8:35 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love how you describe the feeling you get when you're in love!! It's so true, and so full of emotion. Amazing!




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