The affect you have on me.

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By walking into a room you make me smile.
I want your love so much; I’d walk a billion miles.
As soon as I see your face and my pain is
.
Lying in my bed, picture of you fill my head.
When I hear your name I go feeble in the knees.
This affect you have on me proves that you are the one for me.





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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 3, 2009 at 4:15 pm
I don't even know what to say! Wow. I have sooo felt like that before. Amazing poem
 
-xlimitless239x- said...
May 2, 2009 at 4:25 pm
good poem check out mines:
The Ugly Duckling
Too Bad
THE END
Past, Present, and Future
Ice Cold Her
and much more...
 
joy26 said...
May 1, 2009 at 9:59 pm
the affect or the effect?
interesting poem though :)
 
musicgirl757 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 1, 2009 at 9:13 pm
Aw, i love this! There is so much emotion in it, showing the ups and downs of feelings of love. Its wonderful, passionate and honest.
 
:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 8:35 pm
I love how you describe the feeling you get when you're in love!! It's so true, and so full of emotion. Amazing!
 
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