The last leaf

April 24, 2009
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One Autumn Day,
A cold front spray,
Freezing the tree,
The leaves fell to me,
One by one they were gone,
Untill only one leaf to be done,
And when the last leaf fell
The secret was revealed.

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Natalie B. said...
May 2, 2009 at 7:17 pm
I thought it was beutifull. Oscar worthy (if the Oscars were for poems) Keep writing like that and you'll be more famous than Shakespreare! :)
NewWorldsEdge said...
May 2, 2009 at 2:25 am
Beautifully laid out and great finish!
Short and sweet and has a good meaning to it. The reader would like to know what the secret is though :)
Joy26 said...
May 1, 2009 at 10:00 pm
reminds me of the short story by O. Henry by the same name. very melancholy but cool!
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