Spinning

broken glass,

a fatal crash,

everyones there,

totally aware,

i'm spinning,

is this a new beginning,

no one hears me,

they don't see,

I'm not dead, or am I?

I see a light,

I put up a fight,

but I think it's my time to go,

No!

I don't want to leave,

I have things to achieve,

but i'm not winning,

i'm just spinning,

So i go into the unwanted light,

and stop my hopeless fight.





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BlackLeaf said...
May 13, 2009 at 9:14 pm
wow this is good
so many rimes and there not put into some childish form!
this is awesome!
 
BlackMoonWhiteSky This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2009 at 5:29 pm
Wow, that left me breathless.
 
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