You're in my thoughts

April 22, 2009
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was you.
Everything reminded me
of those empty spaces
you should
be in.

I walked past your car,
all our trips,
to everywhere.

Glanced at my phone,
of you, teasing,
"You type so slow!"
of that message,
the one about the

I sat in your spot on
the couch.
I walked past your
where did you go?

I glanced at the clock,
5:12 (blink) 5:12
your room number. 512.

I walked past the
look! a picture of us.
took it to my
room and
framed it,
sketched it,
cried over it.

I wonder, where you are
who you're with
if you know,
you're in my thoughts.

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firstsnowfalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 1:36 pm
Very powerful... it is personal and emotional, but also, in a way, generic, in that so many can relate. Great job!
emo.panda101 said...
Aug. 8, 2009 at 11:08 pm
i can relate to all your poems i love them all
EleanorRigby This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 11, 2009 at 10:54 pm
yeah the way you wrote it is so interesting. i can tell you really think about when to skip to the next line, cuz it really adds emphasis on certain words. i do the same thing. i feel like i can envision your thought process while writing this poem.
TJ21992 said...
May 11, 2009 at 8:28 pm
Wow this is wow! I loved it and I can relate it's great. Oh yes to answer you question, yes my poem Loss Of Control is about an eating disorder, but it is also about cutting too. But yeah I love your poem, you should really get more on here it is really good.
Kumang said...
May 7, 2009 at 9:26 am
this is really good :-)
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