Come Far

April 23, 2009
By Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!


I've come so far, and tried so hard, and still i get nothing.
I do anything and everything to make people happy, but the more i try the more they just seem to hate me.
I can't take having people mad at me. it's not right.
It makes me feel horrible and mad at myself...
.... Because I know i'm the cause of their hatrid and pain.
So maybe i should just quit and give up. For i am tired, too tired to try anymore.
So i quit, from now on i will only try a little or maybe not at all.
It hurts to do something, or try and still get nothing in return.

I try so hard, and come so far and still i have nothing.
Not a praise, Not a prayer, Not a hope, or a dream....


The author's comments:
Written 3/24/09 at 10:18pm
written to be an example of what happens when you care too much..........

"you come so far and still get nothing back...."

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Ookami DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 3:49 pm
Ookami DIAMOND, Kiansas City, Missouri
50 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't give up! Keep on going! Till victory is won!!!

sure i'd like that and thanks. you can look at more of my work too.

Milo! said...
on Mar. 11 2010 at 3:42 pm
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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