The Flight of the Leaf

April 9, 2009
The leaf,
Like a bird,
Leaves the nest,
Leaves the tree,
It jumps from safety,
It falls to the ground,
It floats in the gentle breeze,
Gliding to and fro with the wind,
It stops,
Not a sound is made,
Not a head is turned,
Or an animal scared,
Because no one notices,
The flight of the leaf

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pinkvolleyballgirl said...
Jun. 14, 2009 at 5:48 pm
thanks for the comments!
sallyloco said...
Jun. 11, 2009 at 2:14 pm
very VERY pretty! i loved it. ;D
pinkvolleyballgirl said...
Jun. 7, 2009 at 10:50 pm
oops dayla d is golden d now
pinkvolleyballgirl said...
May 27, 2009 at 9:43 pm
thanks dalya d! If you just go outside, describe something totally normal like a leaf falling, or wind whistling, something like that. then use some personification . it will turn out really awesome! thanks for the comment!!!!
Dalya D. said...
May 26, 2009 at 10:29 pm
I really like it. It's very original: I have never seen any poem or article about a leaf, and I have never read anything that makes something regular or uninteresting sound deep and insightful. Great job!:D
pinkvolleyballgirl said...
May 21, 2009 at 11:11 pm
yes indeed. thats why i thought it would be something cool to write about(:
hope.floats said...
May 21, 2009 at 2:34 pm
This is really cool - I've never thought about a leaf falling that much. It must be a big deal to the leaf, even if it isn't to us. =)
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