HIM

By Krissy, inver grove heights, MN

he holds me when i start to cry
makes me smile with just his eyes
he shares my hopes, dreams, fears
he wipes away my tears
and i love him without regret...
to bad i haven't found him yet!

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romance_lover said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 11:11 pm:

oh this is just awesome lol you should be proud you wrote ti... its absolutely hilarious yet truley relevant :D Good Work!

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:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 8:43 pm:

I love this, I didn't expect the last line either. Of course, it's so true. LOVE IT!

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musicgirl757 said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 11:40 am:

this is nice, i see the message you are trying to send to the reader. its very clever, especially the last line. nice job!

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Abigail W. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 11:24 pm:

I like it. :)

May I ask how you all made your user settings? I've been trying forever, but there's no "My Settings" button on my computer.

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jennnnnnn said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 12:57 am:

ahahaha wow i love the last line, definitely wasn't expecting that. this is cute (: feel free to check out my poems ! thanks

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KICK3593 said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 10:13 pm:

You can't joke in verse, and especially in fields such as love.

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DinosoarJen said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 8:44 pm:

Cute!