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he holds me when i start to cry
makes me smile with just his eyes
he shares my hopes, dreams, fears
he wipes away my tears
and i love him without regret...
to bad i haven't found him yet!



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romance_lover This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 5, 2009 at 11:11 pm:
oh this is just awesome lol you should be proud you wrote ti... its absolutely hilarious yet truley relevant :D Good Work!
 
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:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 8:43 pm:
I love this, I didn't expect the last line either. Of course, it's so true. LOVE IT!
 
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musicgirl757This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 11:40 am:
this is nice, i see the message you are trying to send to the reader. its very clever, especially the last line. nice job!
 
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Abigail W. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 11:24 pm:
I like it. :)

May I ask how you all made your user settings? I've been trying forever, but there's no "My Settings" button on my computer.
 
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jennnnnnn This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 12:57 am:
ahahaha wow i love the last line, definitely wasn't expecting that. this is cute (: feel free to check out my poems ! thanks
 
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KICK3593 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 10:13 pm:
You can't joke in verse, and especially in fields such as love.
 
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DinosoarJen This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 8:44 pm:
Cute!
 
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