April 20, 2009
By Ashley Bonno BRONZE, Ft Lauderdale, Kentucky
Ashley Bonno BRONZE, Ft Lauderdale, Kentucky
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and then you say to imagine the sky
in the night when the stars are bright
and the people are gone
and the places we’ve been
are places no more
only empty holes

and you say you don’t want to lose control but
I’m watching you in that night sky
you said to imagine
and I’m seeing you
really seeing you
and you say nothing but
continuous streams of Blank.

and you explain that things aren’t like they used to be
and I agree
because I know things are spiraling
and doesn’t that hurt?
and you nod your head and look into the night sky that you said to imagine
and you breathe in

and you say how can it not hurt?
and I say

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on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:13 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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wow that is awsome ;) i loved it!

Ruthey GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 6:53 pm
Ruthey GOLD, West Midlands, Other
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this is amazing, its so vivid, you've done really well do get it so raw and emotional. i wish i could get that kind of immediacy in my poems. although, i would say, don't capitalise the blank!!

nicmoo SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 2:25 pm
nicmoo SILVER, Florence, Kentucky
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well this is just terrific.

and i must say.

when i look at you.... i see forever.

hahahaha. go ashley

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