With and Withou You

April 16, 2009
By passionate16 SILVER, Arbyrd, Missouri
passionate16 SILVER, Arbyrd, Missouri
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get me talking
and ill pour out my soul
get me to smile
and ill never stop
make me love you
and ill never let you go
let me go
and ill crumble to pieces
ill put on a smile
so you dont feel bad
cry a little
but then ill see you again
my heart will race
and ill feel better for a while
till i loose sight of you again
then the sadness returns, burdening my soul once more


The author's comments:
I wrote this after a very personal experience.

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on May. 15 2010 at 9:30 am
passionate16 SILVER, Arbyrd, Missouri
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Thanks. What caused me to write that happened about 3 years ago.

on May. 14 2010 at 10:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awww well i really like this. u wrote a very nicee poem




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