April 16, 2009
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The soft padding of my running feet,
Rhythmically ran at a hypnotic beat.
My legs moved smoothly, forward and back
Propelling me faster, across the race track.
A quick glance behind showed that I was in lead,
While the rest of the group tried to quicken their speed.
I focused my run, tried to steady my pace,
I’d a long ways to go, had a long run to race.
When all of a sudden I spotted near my side,
A quick paced runner, with a long-legged stride.
He smiled at me like he’d already won,
Yet he looked really happy, like this was great fun.
I smoldered inside cause I had to win,
Not some idiot with a stupid looking grin!
I ran ever faster and soon was ahead,
Yet the long-legged runner just laughed and then sped.
And once again he was in lead of the group,
My body felt exhausted and I started to droop.
This wasn’t fair; I had to get past him,
Though my lungs burned and my eyesight grew dim.
I barely even noticed when he ran o’er the line,
To win the race, which should have been mine.
I realized with a start as I gasped for air,
That though he’d won the race I didn’t even care.
What mattered was that the race had been fun,
And now it was over, now it was done.
The thought made me smile put a laugh to my lips,
While I opened my water container and took a few sips.
It wasn’t about competing; I didn’t care if he’d won,
All that really mattered was that I had had fun!

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Robyn97 said...
Jul. 21, 2011 at 11:59 am
The rhyming worked really well in this setting; I loved the story behind it, too. Very unique; in a good way, though. =)
ZAVERY said...
Apr. 11, 2010 at 1:22 pm
Wow! This is a very unique type of writing you wrote! I love this! Keep writing!!!!!
mbrewer said...
Sept. 2, 2009 at 11:11 am
thats a very good poem i love it you have a great talenent!!!
Shawna B. said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 3:29 am
This is the best poem ever!!!!!!
teenpowergirl16 said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 11:50 pm
You are great julian!! This is a great poem! :) Keep up the good work! :) Your BFF,
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