Losing My grasp

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No one wants me here
i have to face reality
need to stop lying to myself
saying everything is gonna be alright
no it's not, nothing is right
everything is ruined
i have nothing left
all but you
the only thing i still have hold of
will i lose you too?
i hope not you are the only thing i lean to
the only one sincere enough to listen to my problems
you help me when i am in need
and don't care what others think
but you won't be with me always
one day i will be alone
i will have no one to hold
no shoulder to cry on
on my side i will have nothing





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Claire_Milan said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 3:19 pm
awwww ;(....I like this one. I have felt this way a lot of times in my life but even moreso recently....Truly brilliant
 
Ellie:) replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 2:44 pm
thank you which one of my poems do u like the best.?
 
Claire_Milan replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 4:27 pm
Definitely this one so far. However that might change. Im not on as much as I would like to be because I stay busy at school and stuff, but I will absolutely keep your writing fresh on my mind every time I log in! :D
 
Ellie:) replied...
Mar. 5, 2010 at 2:39 pm
hahah thats so sweet.! LOL i know im always so busy but i always come in at lunch and just go on here its so refreshing just to get away from the real world and just read some poems .! :)
 
CAMY.K said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 4:33 pm
Your poetry is so full of your personal emotion and heartfelt wishes. I read your poetry and I can picture someone saying these things as they try to figure out the world. Most people are not brave enough to put these feelings into words and you are. Stay Brave and keep writing!
 
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