Broken

November 24, 2008
By Anonymous

Pick up these pieces that fall from my body,
Blood drips fast, save me.
No one loves this abandoned person on the street.
Who would ever feel my pain?
Suffering and demons attack my heart,
Pins are sticking to my not sown, ragged, imperfect self.
Why now? Why me? Why can't I be happy?
I choose to be something I'm not, and I'm scared.
Surrender is the last thing on my mind,
But my insides scream for a Savior.
Porcelain fills my veins, don't shatter me.
Not knowing who I am,
Denying all that is good in this wretched world.
Help.


The author's comments:
Nothing inspired me to do this piece. Well, my life did. I just was battling with depression and still am. It's a tough thing to do and to cope with. But I hope you liked it, because this poem is representing my heart. The Lord will help me though. I just have to choose to go to Him. *smiles*

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on Apr. 30 2009 at 5:04 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Wow, i really love this poem It is great!

on Apr. 24 2009 at 12:38 am
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love this poem, it's so true and real. Not everyone is happy,which a lot of people don't realize!

on Apr. 23 2009 at 6:40 pm
hayleypm93 SILVER, Edinburg, Virginia
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this was really well written and very from the heart. Hold tight to your Savior and be optimistic in life!! ^_^

livelaugh3 said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 2:59 am
livelaugh3, Durham, New Hampshire
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wow that is an amazingly emotional poem. it may be sad but its good! i hope you can use your heart to write many more maeningful poems.

on Apr. 23 2009 at 1:13 am
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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awww wow this is awesome, i think the Lord could do you good he is an amazing being.




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