A Love Poem

March 29, 2009
By xXxEmoKittiexXx SILVER, Roebuck, South Carolina
xXxEmoKittiexXx SILVER, Roebuck, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
The metaphorical brick walls in life are not there to keep people out, they are there to make sure you want in bad enough.->->-> comes from Randy Palche's last lecture :)

Write me a story,
About two lovers,
A boy and a girl,
Who are forever together,
Now if only the story were true,
And the girl was me,
And the boy was always you.

Write me a song,
To the tune our hearts sing,
Make it about a couple,
And true love in high school,
And the couple is us,
And always will be,
The couple grows up and,
Lives a dream happily.

Write me a poem,
And tell me how you feel,
Show me the future,
And how time stands still,
When we fall asleep,
Together under the stars, And Have us kissing,
Kissing in the rain,
Give me a ring and,
Make me your wife,
Make me your world,
I'll give you my life.

The author's comments:
I wrote this in the ninth grade. It goes in a story I was writing.

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on Apr. 22 2009 at 1:36 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is absolutely AMAZING!! I LOVE IT!!! I really like the way you rhymed a couple lines to make it flow better, but didn't rhyme others.

misses420 said...
on Apr. 21 2009 at 5:03 pm
love the poem,.... hate the persons name. be yourself, not a emo. life gets hard sometimes. get up, get over it, get going.

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