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Live, Love, & Laugh

Live
Like there is no worries for you and your family,
Love
Like it's all you've got to show for,
Laugh
Just to make you and others happy,
But mostly watch as others do the same
And make the world a better and worry free for ever.



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gymbabe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 5:48 pm:
Despite the fact that many have used this topic for poems, I thought that this was, in fact, sweet and inspiring.  Short and simple, very well-stated and rhythmic. 
 
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--LoveHappens-- said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 10:17 am:
I really like this but the topic is one I've heard too many time and you have the same ideas as everyone.... try to come up with something new
 
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DanceAwayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 12, 2010 at 10:04 am:
I really like this poem, but the concept is a bit overused.
 
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:PBUBBLES:P said...
Apr. 22, 2009 at 1:39 pm:
I love it, it's so inspiring and so true!! Try to find a different word for mostly, though, it will sound better. Otherwise, it's amazing!!
 
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