Live, Love, & Laugh

March 29, 2009
By Shoka_no_sanraizu SILVER, Huntington, Indiana
Shoka_no_sanraizu SILVER, Huntington, Indiana
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Live
Like there is no worries for you and your family,
Love
Like it's all you've got to show for,
Laugh
Just to make you and others happy,
But mostly watch as others do the same
And make the world a better and worry free for ever.


The author's comments:
Hey my name is Savannah. This poem I made came to me when I was thinking of Live, Laugh, and love. I thought that what I wrote seems to be very inspiring.

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on Jul. 6 2010 at 5:48 pm
OfficialApprover PLATINUM, Orefield, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Grab life by the balls. -Slobberknocker
We cannot change the cards we're dealt just how we play the hand
Experience is what you get when you didn't get what you wanted
It's pretty easy to be smart when you're parroting smart people
-Randy Pausch

Despite the fact that many have used this topic for poems, I thought that this was, in fact, sweet and inspiring.  Short and simple, very well-stated and rhythmic. 

on Jun. 12 2010 at 10:17 am
--LoveHappens--, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who knows you, but loves you anyway"

I really like this but the topic is one I've heard too many time and you have the same ideas as everyone.... try to come up with something new

on Jun. 12 2010 at 10:04 am
Sketched97 PLATINUM, Silver Spring, Maryland
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I really like this poem, but the concept is a bit overused.

on Apr. 22 2009 at 1:39 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

I love it, it's so inspiring and so true!! Try to find a different word for mostly, though, it will sound better. Otherwise, it's amazing!!


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