Love

April 13, 2009
By xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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You leave me here,
I beg you to s tay.
You left me along,
Standing in the rain.
You broke my heart,
It tore me apart.
And now you've gone,
Without me today.
But we can't part,
We're meant ot be.
Because when you left,
It took a piece of me.
And without you here,
I am not a whole.
When you came back,
I was once more.
My heart is one
With yours again.
And now I understand
Why you left.
It was out of love,
That you left me there,
And out of love
That you came back here.


The author's comments:
PLEASE COMMENT!!! this poem kind of reminds me of New Moon when Edward leaves Bella, but i didn't intend for it to be, that's just what it reminded me of when i read it.

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on May. 4 2009 at 2:06 am
jennnnnnn BRONZE, Irvine, California
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pretty simplistic, but i still like it a lot :)



i loooove the last four lines, how you wrapped it up, it makes it all fit perfectly together.



try experimenting! with anything, different rhyme scheme, whatever works for you, i think you definitely have a lot of potential :)



itd be great if you could check out my poems/pictures thanks!

on Apr. 29 2009 at 3:03 am
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Dustin D. if you read this, I can't find any of your work, I was trying to, but I couldn't. Sorry!

on Apr. 27 2009 at 1:58 pm
ScoobyDoobieDoo SILVER, Estes Park, Colorado
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this is awsome poetry. hey you should checkout some of mine

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 9:35 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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Good job! Personally, I am not at all a fan of twilight, but it's still a neat poem.

*loafman* said...
on Apr. 24 2009 at 5:21 am
OMG i love you work it is UHmazing!

iBloom BRONZE said...
on Apr. 23 2009 at 2:26 am
iBloom BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Thank you so much for your comment:) I really like your poetry, i can really relate to it. Thank you for opening my eyes.

on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:24 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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Sorry, I accidentally put along in the third line, it is supposed to be alone.


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