Love Sonnet

April 12, 2009
By Ahmed Elsamadisi SILVER, Sunnyside, New York
Ahmed Elsamadisi SILVER, Sunnyside, New York
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Our souls are apart but will one day reunite
To hold my love and treat her right
To be the shoulder in which she cries
To be the reason for her to rise
To be source for all your laughter
Not till death but till the hereafter
Oh I know that your my shining star
So come to me from where ever u are
I need your help to survive and remain
Cause I am but a flower and u r my rain
My love, my soul shall never be taken
For this will cause my balance to be shaken
For our love must sore to eternity
For this I ask “will u marry me?”

The author's comments:
this is a sonnet inspired by the great Shakespear!
i really hope everyone likes it and read my other poems if you like it

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on May. 5 2009 at 12:17 am
it's nice but in case you didn't know(or maybe it was deliberate) you weren't following the Shakespeare rhyme scheme.

on Apr. 21 2009 at 11:34 pm
xXxFallingTearsxXx GOLD, Cottonwood, Idaho
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I did really like this poem. it is so sweet, great job. i will read your others too:)


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