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The rain is falling on this city.
Making what to me sounds so pretty,
She freshens my air
And dictates what I wear,
I look to the desert with pity.





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despurlock This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 6:07 pm
This is really great! I love it because its a piece you can read over and over again and always find something new! Keep it up! 5 stars :)

P.S. Please check out some of my work and lemme know what you think! Thanks so much! And again, great job! I'll be checking out some more of your work!
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2009 at 3:19 am
Loved it!!!! It was UBER awesome!!!
 
Evelyn said...
Jul. 31, 2009 at 5:26 pm
wat do u mean "i meant limerick"? also, KEEP WRITING URE AWESOME
 
xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 9, 2009 at 12:28 am
WOW. I love this! I don't even know how to describe the way i feel about it. All I can say is pretty please keep writing, you're good at it.
 
benmagos said...
May 18, 2009 at 5:49 am
I meant limerick. :)
 
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