Father God

April 11, 2009
By Ashley Robinson BRONZE, West Point, Virginia
Ashley Robinson BRONZE, West Point, Virginia
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There was a woman
Torn from her hopes and dreams
She tried her best to believe.
She pleaded to god
To all his mighty angels..
To take her pain away..
And save it for when she's stronger.
He never heard her whispers
Never heard her crys..
But one day she decides to die..
Her friends and family..
Begged her..
Begger her to live long..
But she let go of her thread
That held her life.
She fell farther than
Any hole could go
Tears shed for her..
Tears shed for everything around her..
Screams of pain filled the night air..
Father god they said in unison..
Why have you failed upon thee.
Why did you let this child fall
Into the heaps of hell...
Was she not good enough for thee..
Was she not the best she could be..
We shed our tears for her every sorrow...
Why heavenly father..
Have you failed upon thee..

The author's comments:
I've written this piece in reference to my step mother.In my opinion I believe it was written well :).

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