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The thread of our love
is thick
And yet unwoven
You have used it
Once to many
as a sheild against the forces
And as the cold
rips and tears
Our hearts
become threadbare
As you rest your head
Upon the well-used sheet
there is an impression
left by your soul
A feeling
The feeling of what we once were,
is imprisoned
in the threads of our hearts
And
as each thread is worn
A heartstring is torn
I am left threadbare
imprisoned in the fine unravelings
of what is left





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chrisbriones said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 10:25 pm
so remember a few months ago i told you that my poem was just waiting approval? and you agreed to check it out? well its posted now. and id love it if you could let me know what you think!
 
chrisbriones said...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 9:48 pm
who has done unto you so as to become your inspiration?
i must say, this is beautiful. it need not be long to be so.
if i may, could y
 
chrisbriones replied...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 9:49 pm
could you please read my poem?
 
Anjo! said...
May 16, 2009 at 1:24 am
Another amazing one, i must say. =]
 
oliver K. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 8, 2009 at 10:03 pm
I liked this allot. I must say though,it is short. It would be better if it was long. More a complete emotion that an unfinished song.
 
BirdMan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 7, 2009 at 3:07 am
I like the poem alot! But I have to make one little critque (mainly because I feel I have to leave a little constructive critism, because it is the only way we all get better) I would have liked to see it a little longer, with a little more transition, I feel then ending just pops up! Other than it is great, and that is a minor little thing. Check out some of my other poems!
 
JooJoo said...
May 5, 2009 at 11:39 pm
awesome
i love it
 
project827 said...
May 1, 2009 at 9:28 pm
i love this poem! . . . not much else to say . . .
 
Jeffrey said...
Apr. 27, 2009 at 6:41 pm
this is great, i saw u left a comment on mine, who might this be?
 
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