Empty Inside

April 10, 2009
By Ineedthesuntorise BRONZE, Maple Grove, Minnesota
Ineedthesuntorise BRONZE, Maple Grove, Minnesota
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I’m desolate.

There’s nothing else to say.
There is nothing inside of me.

Nothing. Zip. Zero.

I’m void.
I can’t feel.
My brain feels


Disconnected,




Groggy,

Almost asleep.

Oh, how I wish I were asleep.
Locked up inside
A different world to explore.
I might feel something



Else than

This.
Hollowness. Emptiness.
The worst part is
Not being able to feel


Scared


Or alone.
Just vacancy

Inside of


Me.


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on Dec. 2 2009 at 1:06 pm
I used to feel like this everyday! I had a depression problem and often had self-injuring and suicidal thoughts, though never carried through with any of them, thank God! The ONLY (and i do mean ONLY ) reason I came out of that was because I asked God to forgive me and pull me out of it. To feel his love and let it warm up and thaw out my frozen heart. And the crazy thing is, he loved me enough to do it. Even though all of my thoughts were 'Oh God! Why are you letting this happen to me!? Why can't everything just be okay?!' He still brought me through, no matter that i blamed him for everything. It was amazing. This is a really good poem that many can relate to. Keep up the good work! :)

on Jun. 15 2009 at 5:56 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awww this is beautiful and filled with so much emotion. I almost feel the same way.

brewer BRONZE said...
on May. 13 2009 at 1:20 am
brewer BRONZE, Zanesville, Ohio
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I love this poem and you are right this is the way I pretty much feel and how I think about things, and thank you for the comment =)




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