My identity

April 9, 2009
When I see you cry I feel the pain inside me When I see you hide I feel the emptiness When I see you try to fit in I feel the different personalities you have in you When I look into the mirror I see I realize I am really you

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_TruStr_ This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 11:53 pm
Oh wow. Besides the few errors of lack of spacing, it was great.

I actually think the lack oif words and brief text made it intriguing; the ability to say so much in such a short way. ^__^
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