...and so they died

and so they died
to the fiery waters of hell,
only to once again see
the light of day,
for heaven and hell were not:
only the coldness
of death and oppression
existed in this cruel life
and all lives after





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project827 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 5:00 pm
i'm liking it! thumbs up keep it up!
 
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 5:00 pm
it's pretty good but the meaning is a bit confusing. if i forced a guess tho it would be about rebirth? the wording is great, keep writing (:
 
scribere said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 12:23 am
(the author)
i actually have no idea what it means; this kinda just came to me....
 
EdytD said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 5:47 pm
I love the strong imagery, but the poem itself is a little unclear - what do you mean by "they died?" All in all, though, it's a strong poem. Good job!
 
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