...and so they died

April 8, 2009
and so they died
to the fiery waters of hell,
only to once again see
the light of day,
for heaven and hell were not:
only the coldness
of death and oppression
existed in this cruel life
and all lives after





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project827 said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 5:00 pm
i'm liking it! thumbs up keep it up!
 
SilverDawn said...
Jul. 17, 2009 at 5:00 pm
it's pretty good but the meaning is a bit confusing. if i forced a guess tho it would be about rebirth? the wording is great, keep writing (:
 
scribere said...
Apr. 28, 2009 at 12:23 am
(the author)
i actually have no idea what it means; this kinda just came to me....
 
EdytD said...
Apr. 26, 2009 at 5:47 pm
I love the strong imagery, but the poem itself is a little unclear - what do you mean by "they died?" All in all, though, it's a strong poem. Good job!
 
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