...and so they died

April 8, 2009
By tragicxharmony SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
tragicxharmony SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I am waiting; I am wanting; no more fighting; no more bleeding. <3


and so they died
to the fiery waters of hell,
only to once again see
the light of day,
for heaven and hell were not:
only the coldness
of death and oppression
existed in this cruel life
and all lives after


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on Dec. 11 2009 at 5:00 pm
project827 GOLD, Portage, Michigan
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"Real Revolution Starts At Learning, If You're Not Angry, Then You Are Not Paying Attention" - Tim McIlrath

i'm liking it! thumbs up keep it up!

on Jul. 17 2009 at 5:00 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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it's pretty good but the meaning is a bit confusing. if i forced a guess tho it would be about rebirth? the wording is great, keep writing (:

on Apr. 28 2009 at 12:23 am
tragicxharmony SILVER, Vicksburg, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
I am waiting; I am wanting; no more fighting; no more bleeding. <3

(the author)

i actually have no idea what it means; this kinda just came to me....

EdytD SILVER said...
on Apr. 26 2009 at 5:47 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I love the strong imagery, but the poem itself is a little unclear - what do you mean by "they died?" All in all, though, it's a strong poem. Good job!


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