I Wish

April 6, 2009
By Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov


I see him whisper in her ear,
I feel my heart ache,
I see him kiss her without fear,
I feel my heart break.

I see them all around me,
These happy, smiling pairs,
They drive me to insanity,
Why can't I have that? It''s not fair.

I love hanging out with you,
But I want something more,
I try to tell you in all that I do,
I may as well knock down the door.

You see me as I friend,
I know this to be true,
I'll love you to the end,
I just wish I could tell you,

I love you, yes it's true,
It isn't that hard to see,
Tell me if you love me too,
Then you and I could be

So much
So much
So much more.
So much
So much
So much more.

I want that for us,
That loving certainty,
No need to fuss,
It's the way it was meant to be

I wish that you were bolder,
But I guess that's why I love you,
I see the way he holds her,
That's not what we'd do.

I think I know you love me,
But I can't help but doubt,
There is nothing I can see,
That shows me what you're thinking about.

You see me as I friend,
I know this to be true,
I'll love you to the end,
I just wish I could tell you,

I love you, yes it's true,
It isn't that hard to see,
Tell me if you love me too,
Then you and I could be

So much
So much
So much more.
So much
So much
So much more.
I wish...

I wish I could read your mind,
So I could see what you're thinking about,
I wonder what I'd find,
Would it make me want to shout

Yes! I knew it!
Now I can get on with it,
Or no! I blew it!
He doesn't love me one bit.

I'm hoping that you're not
Thinking anything that would hurt me,
I wish that I could spot,
Proof that you'll love for infinity.

You see me as I friend,
I know this to be true,
I'll love you to the end,
I just wish I could tell you,

I love you, yes it's true,
It isn't that hard to see,
Tell me if you love me too,
Then you and I could be

So much
So much
So much more.
So much
So much
So much more.

I love you....
I want you...
Is it enough to make you
Love me too?
I wish...


The author's comments:
Let's just put it this way... I get my poetry from real life. Please comment!! It's more of a song.

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on Jul. 1 2010 at 9:47 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aw<333 u kept me interested to read it to the end!! :)) goooood jobb!! definitely:DD this is totally awesome, i applaud!!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 5:52 pm
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

i liked this poem quite a bit, it brought out the uncertainty that you feel when you want to know if he loves you, thats exactly what makes a poem something that poeple will lovew to read, the ability to put your emotions on the paper, great job, and an even better poem, a five for this poem

 


on Mar. 21 2010 at 4:39 pm
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
11 articles 0 photos 299 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

Another great piece. Once again relatable and honest. Also very song-like. Once again though, some parts flowed awesome, and some not so much. Keep writing.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 6:17 pm
ReneetheGreat PLATINUM, Castle Rock, Colorado
28 articles 3 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength does not come from physical capacity, but from an indomitable will."

WOW! I love this, times a million :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 12:02 pm
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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REALLY GOOD, continue with your passion because it shows how much you love writing.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 12:20 pm
KaraTaylor DIAMOND, Neptune, New Jersey
81 articles 17 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life isn't a matter of milestones, but of moments"

"experience is the name everyone gives to their mistakes."

"be as you wish to seem."

"it's better to be hated for what you are, than to be loved for what you are not."

i really liked this poem. it was very well written

on Oct. 20 2009 at 9:42 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Wow and you said u were jealous of me!!! lol I'm jealous of this poem! Absolutly spectacular!

on Oct. 15 2009 at 9:15 am
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

This is my favorite.

Every one is right, its really good.

I write from real life experiences a lot of the time too.

Its like a release, so I know the feeling that lives behind the words.

Thanks for all of your comments.

They make my day.

Keep posting work and I'll kepp reading it.

:)

on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:25 pm
hannahbee7 DIAMOND, Boca Raton, Florida
67 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You know you’re a writer if your friend tells you a heartbreaking story and your first reaction is – wow, that would make an incredible plot for a novel. You know you’re a smart writer if you manage to keep that reaction to yourself."

Wow this is very pretty! I can relate... can't we all?

Schubster said...
on Aug. 28 2009 at 10:56 pm
I can totally relate....this is my favorite poem of all your poetry..the repeated lines sound like a song.......

ErumK said...
on Aug. 28 2009 at 1:00 pm
ErumK, Bayan, Other
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I thought the same thing, it flows like a song would...

It's really thoughtful and once again honest. =)

on Jun. 8 2009 at 4:24 am
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Nice, it sounds like a song. I felt the same way at one point in time--- I can totally relate! :

on May. 23 2009 at 4:39 am
windswift DIAMOND, Arvada, Colorado
80 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
let it burn, suffering teaches the soul; let it grow, love nourishes the heart.

i actualy liked this piece of work, despite the fact that its a love poem. it stuck a cord deep within me that is rarely touched by words strung together, one of the true rarities to me. a piece that i will never forget, it draws out the perspective of both how you feel about this freind and your fear of what he might do when told.

on Apr. 28 2009 at 10:49 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

Yes, it's a song, and thank you for commenting!! By the way, I love both of your work!!

on Apr. 26 2009 at 11:20 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
56 articles 0 photos 95 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

kewl, i like it. Is it like a song? or did you sing it? Its really really really good, and i like your rhymins!!! its my favorite =)

on Apr. 25 2009 at 6:05 am
Cassie PLATINUM, Delisle, Other
29 articles 3 photos 24 comments
VERY passoinate!


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