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The lord him self

I wake up and i thank the lord for giving me life that day i get to live you will nevera know when your going to die you just know as long as your breathing he's with you i belive we are put on this earth to teach some one somethin and then we will die till then you live al I can say is live life to the fullest you only get one chance to




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HisPurePrincess This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 11:37 pm:
Awesome, but people will take you more seriously if you use proper grammar.  :)
 
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MadMouse said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
Oops. That's supposed to be 'I like your point...'  sorry :)
 
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MadMouse said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 7:08 pm:
I like you point but really, captalize. Punctuate. !?.,;:    
 
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CAPITOLCAP said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 9:41 am:

YOU NEED TO PUNCTUATE YOUR SCENTENCES, BRO.

 

-CAPS CAPS CAPS

 
CAPITOLCAP replied...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 9:42 am :

WOW YOU CAN'T EVEN SPELL-

CAPS CAPS CAPS

 

 
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AnonymousFatty said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 9:39 am:
Do you know what punction is?
 
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QuestionAuthority1128 said...
Dec. 1, 2009 at 6:26 pm:
Your point would be more effectively expressed if you corrected bad grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors, and expanded the piece into well-organized thoughts rather than one large run-on sentence.
 
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singactmime said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 6:10 pm:
that is very true :)
 
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