you door

December 19, 2009
You walk down a long hallway with one key, it’s shiney, golden, and it has your name on it. As your walking down the hall you notice doors on both sides with titles on them like, Drugs, Alcohol, Colledge, Stealing, Gangs, and disapointment. All the doors seem to be saying “open me, Open me”. You open a door that says Alcohol and your key loses it’s shine. You open a door that says colledge and your key lights up! The locks on ALL the doors are the same, but the after math is always different. You get to the end of the hall, after opening a series of doors, only find one left and it is labeled your life. You open it and....

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spiceyredpepper said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 8:37 pm
thanks!will use next time i write a story!:D
SilverSnowflakes said...
Mar. 28, 2010 at 8:43 pm
good... :) my only complaints are a few grammar things such as in your second sentence, "your" should be "you're" because it would be "As you are walking".
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