you door

December 19, 2009
By SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!


You walk down a long hallway with one key, it’s shiney, golden, and it has your name on it. As your walking down the hall you notice doors on both sides with titles on them like, Drugs, Alcohol, Colledge, Stealing, Gangs, and disapointment. All the doors seem to be saying “open me, Open me”. You open a door that says Alcohol and your key loses it’s shine. You open a door that says colledge and your key lights up! The locks on ALL the doors are the same, but the after math is always different. You get to the end of the hall, after opening a series of doors, only find one left and it is labeled your life. You open it and....


The author's comments:
i'm 13 and i'm soo confused about what to do with my life or just what to do period. so im sure this sums it up for everyone hope you like it as much i loved writing it!

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on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:37 pm
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!

thanks!will use next time i write a story!:D

paperflowers said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 8:43 pm
paperflowers, Imaginary, Indiana
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good... :) my only complaints are a few grammar things such as in your second sentence, "your" should be "you're" because it would be "As you are walking".


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