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Blind with Open Eyes

I have often heard it said that love is blind, but i could only want a love with my eyes wide open. Open to every ugly part of you, and every scar. But by the end, still have the same smile on my face as when I first saw you. Naive and open as I was in the beginning. I want our love to be blind with open eyes.





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Nick5 said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 10:34 am
Interesting. Keep it up. I see an a compelling thesis. Do a little research, especially in Shakespeare's plays. Your on to something. Something big. I can feel it.
 
otherpoet said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 5:58 pm
Super sweet! I think you're on to something. I love that its short and to the point, without being abrupt. Keep writing!
 
raichel.jenkins replied...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 6:02 pm
:) thank you so much!
 
StarryRoss said...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 9:21 pm

write more! Ha there is a quote that says something like: Love is not blind. It merely enables one to see what other cannot.

True, right?

 
raichel.jenkins replied...
Dec. 14, 2011 at 9:27 pm
Definitely! and i have written many more but itss taking forever for them to get approved :/
 
celare said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 4:15 pm
This is a great article. You have done so well in illustrating the effect of love, which even when ugly, blinds the beholder. Well done! x
 
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