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I could write about you until my heart pass out from all these unfolded emotions that I have kept for so long all I want. I could fly you to the moon and even make you kiss the stars with my sonnets. I could cry havoc with all this love I have inside that I have longed to show you.

But all these can't make you love me. So they are nothing but worthless words that will forever remain as such.

... because the one person whom I swore to devote all these words of unending affection to,

does not care.





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TheyCallMeSpanky said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 12:28 pm
I know where you're coming from!
 
FireandWater This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 16, 2011 at 7:21 pm
beautifully written, but don't waste your love on a fantasy.  trust me, it's not worth it.  save your love and passion and unending affection for the person who will return it to you in full and forever.  :)
 
carlybeth323 said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 12:51 pm
I love this. I can definately relate.
 
ShelbyMarie93 said...
Jan. 13, 2011 at 3:14 pm

I can totally relate to this too. It sucks (complete understatement).

Keep writing, you've got real talent. :)

 
Hawkberry This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 2:03 pm
This is a beautiful piece. I can definitely relate whole heartedly. Good luck and keep writing ;)
 
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