Shall I Forever Be Broken?

July 9, 2010
The seasons fade, but they never change. The sun hides behind the clouds so full of wrath. The bitter rain drops hide away my tears from the world.

To have found love and to have lost it is tragic; but to love and not be loved in return kills the soul. I am left with no desire and no will to go on, drowning in an ocean of sorrow, you my darling, gave me life, and now that life has passed on.

For I am now as a rose, once so gay and full of life, that has weathered away. The symbolic rose will bloom again, but what shall become of me? Shall I forever be broken?

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Thesilentraven This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2010 at 12:44 pm

Great poem. I like the first bit the best.

Ah, love. How can you be so great and yet cause so much hurt?

misssabrina said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 6:23 pm
Thank you very much
bbygurl21 said...
Jul. 13, 2010 at 5:17 pm
i love this poem its amazing
Sabrina.Nichole replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 10:28 pm
Thank you:)
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