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Three Girls-One Guy

November 3, 2009
By soccerpsycho49 PLATINUM, Teaneck, New Jersey
soccerpsycho49 PLATINUM, Teaneck, New Jersey
37 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say that sunshine is happiness have never danced in the rain.


There’s a Guy. He walks the halls like He’s all that. And i stare at Him like He’s more than that. Blonde hair, blued eyed, absolutely perfect. And He carries himself like He’s God, but in the most humble fashion. And He laughs like He’s a prince, but in the most charming, down to earth way. And He brags about his thousand achievements, but only through actions. And He walks the halls like He’s all that….but He’s more than that.

Three girls are in love with him.

Girl Number One lost the battle. Her heart was broken, but silently mended itself. Paralyzed for but a few days, She reentered the game called love.

Girl Number Two won him over, and He loved her back. Together they danced beneath a thousand stars, and happily fed each other heart’s through their love.

and girl number three. she never fought any battle, and even was an ally with Girl Number Two in winning him over. she enabled the happy couple to love, but with that she disable herself. and every day girl number three wonders if she could have done things differently. but all there’s left to now, is to stare at the Guy’s back turned, and know that He’ll never be more than a friend. every night girl number three cries a little in her heart, all because a Guy—a Guy i never even fought for.



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on Feb. 24 2011 at 11:16 am
DanniTwin502 PLATINUM, Wake Forest, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything Happens for a reason."
"The only thing I know, is I don't know anything."
"Would you rather me be honest, or lie?"

I love this! Exactly how I feel, I'm girl number three all the way(: kinda like we want our friends happy, and our own happiness is it's reward, but even with that reward a peice of our heart is always with the boy and we will always wonder ifs.

on Feb. 24 2011 at 10:12 am
katiebug06123 BRONZE, Circleville, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Even the Best fall down sometimes ,

very emotional, although this happens almost every single day :(

on Jan. 17 2011 at 9:37 am
Finding-me PLATINUM, Dover-Foxcroft, Maine
45 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's kind of fun to do the impossible

funny, my sister was girl number two, she dumped him two weeks later. i am girl number three. Maby soon i will get to be girl number two.

on Dec. 20 2010 at 8:12 pm
skoppy355 BRONZE, Arlington Heights, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Life's like an hourglass glued to the table- from Breathe (2 am) by Anna Nalick

I'm girl #3 in every way

on Dec. 20 2010 at 4:03 pm
sabina22 BRONZE, Glen Mills, Pennsylvania
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Haha this is my life written here, or one part of it a while ago anyway I've moved on now...One of my best friends is Girl #1 and was simultaneously Girl #2 before she was Girl #1, and was eventually replaced with Girl #2 Version 1.2....I thoughout the whole thing was Girl #3. OH WELL. This was a really good piece though really well done and good job =)

chillifritoz said...
on Nov. 15 2010 at 7:19 pm
chillifritoz, Fayetteville, North Carolina
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wow i better get ready... soon to be #3 =(

on Nov. 6 2010 at 2:33 pm
Gracious PLATINUM, Go Away, Kansas
22 articles 0 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life sucks and then you die, yeah, i should be so lucky"



-Jacob, Twilight

I’m still that girl who falls when she runs, Getting back up, because falling is fun.

oh my god this is actually my life in a few paragraphs. i would be girl # 3

on Sep. 1 2010 at 6:40 am
meaghantt BRONZE, Raywood, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" Phillippians 4:13

Good! I can relate to #1...check out my most recent nonfiction post!

on Aug. 10 2010 at 7:34 pm
brown.sugar BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 article 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
i lovin it

this ws good i can relate to girl no.3 . can you check out my work too. thanxs

on Jun. 5 2010 at 10:05 pm
SkyeOfLights GOLD, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
“Writing is a form of personal freedom. It frees us from the mass identity we see in the making all around us. In the end, writers will write not to be outlaw heroes of some underculture but mainly to save themselves, to survive as individuals.”

This is amazing! I can relate to all 3 girls. Especially girl number 1 most recently. Good job!

on Jun. 5 2010 at 1:45 am
HeraclitusDRM SILVER, Sewell, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"For a man to conquer himself is the first and noblest of all victories." -Plato

Truest, most genuine piece of work I've read on this site so far.

lake2613 said...
on May. 14 2010 at 1:10 pm
i can realt relate to girl number 2 adn 3 ive been in both cases before.

on Mar. 31 2010 at 12:23 pm
sidneynicole BRONZE, McKinney, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When life knock you down to your knees, just know you are in a perfect postition to pray."

this was awsome i can relate to girl number three

on Mar. 16 2010 at 5:36 pm
BasketballChick5, San Diego, California
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Favorite Quote:
:)Just Do It:) <3

I really liked this it was awesome~

taylor said...
on Mar. 8 2010 at 9:26 am
i really like this one and i know how girl number one and three feel like. :)

on Feb. 21 2010 at 3:10 pm
chick-a-dee-wasaga-3 BRONZE, California, Florida
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Yes. I can totally relate, when you think like no guys like you, but their just little boys, who dont even know what pretty is

on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:15 am
soccerpsycho49 PLATINUM, Teaneck, New Jersey
37 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Those who say that sunshine is happiness have never danced in the rain.

okay. i get that. i know my feelings are just those of a teenager. and by this point, im actually totally over that guy that this was written about. but at the moment, it just felt like the world was ending, u no?

on Feb. 20 2010 at 10:06 pm
chick-a-dee-wasaga-3 BRONZE, California, Florida
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Like seriously girl, i understand that you might think you completely love this guy, but honestly, we truly dont know what love is.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:11 pm
musiclover114 SILVER, Woodstock, Georgia
7 articles 0 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.

born an original, why die a copy?

i completly agree with chick-a-dee.... if he acts like a god then just get over him but i do understand ur pain and i promise it will get better:)

on Feb. 15 2010 at 4:35 pm
chick-a-dee-wasaga-3 BRONZE, California, Florida
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Seriously, i have fallen into that situation, and i know how your grief feels like. But their is many guys out there, and in my opionion a guy who walks around like he's god must be really conceited. You can find a great guy.


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