why they keep telling me

March 26, 2010
By kianamarie BRONZE, Williamspoet, Pennsylvania
kianamarie BRONZE, Williamspoet, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
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why do she keep telling me she's going to stop but she never don't why he keeps tellin me he love me but he never shows it why they keep telling me i need to get over it but i don't and i won't why can i let the past go i can't i look in he's eyes an tell him i love him why cant i tell her its not right why can't they just stop messing with my life and let me be lone.

The author's comments:
this is how i feel

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on Apr. 23 2011 at 5:44 pm
Listen.to.me., Goshen, Massachusetts
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Your grammar is a bit confusing, but it pretty much rhymed and flowed realllyyy nice. You should make it into a song, its real powerful. :) 


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