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TEARFUL ADIEU

April 12, 2014
By VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.


Mom so secured I was in your womb;
My life inside you was a real miracle!
My tiny feet swam in glee; my little hands pets cuddling you merrily
My toothless mouth would giggle and cackle
Mom, so happy was I in your womb
But one day some quivering clatters I could hear
I heard someone scream and roar,"I don't want daughter anymore."
I sobbed as I listened to your helpless tears.
Mom, how could I smile in your womb
When I understood that being a daughter is so bad?
My little eyes moaned and cried, something in me has already died.
Even before I realized that I would soon be dead

Mom I shall no longer I shall dwell in your womb.
Your warmth and affection I shall surely miss
I shall not lie; I had not expected to die.
But fate had in store me this deadly kiss.
Mom so happy I am to be a part of your womb
Although the togetherness was only a few noon
As death approaches near; I bid you a tearful adieu with fear
Dear mom may a hundred sons be born to you soon.


The author's comments:
Please read this and protest against female killing all over the world.

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on Feb. 22 2015 at 7:14 pm
JesusandHisLawyers SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"who the fuck has a favorite personal quote what does that even mean" - me, just now.

This poem does NOT seem to be against abortion, but against gendercide. All the prolifers can leave the comments now.

Starakk SILVER said...
on Oct. 17 2014 at 9:23 am
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Nicely written. Have a powerful Message.

on May. 20 2014 at 4:27 pm
ShadowOfDarkness PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
20 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
Coute que coute(Cost What It May)

wow just amazing. 5/5

on May. 11 2014 at 3:46 pm
sillywabbit BRONZE, Federal Way, Washington
2 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where there is love there is life.
Mahatma Gandhi

that was beautiful totally well written happy mothers day 

on May. 11 2014 at 10:56 am
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
324 articles 10 photos 1166 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,
More real than solid earth;
And to these death does not mean decay,
But only another birth"
- Isabella Banks

Wow. That was amazing!  

on May. 10 2014 at 11:13 am
Teenwriterwithadream BRONZE, Interlachen, Florida
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This is good but sad and if it was really supposed to happen I am truly sorry

on May. 10 2014 at 7:39 am
Cassie_Monroe BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am trying to find myself. Sometimes that's not easy."
-Marilyn Monroe

"Fear is stupid; So are regrets"
-Marilyn Monroe

"It's better to be unhappy alone than unhappy with someone - so far."
-Marilyn Monroe

Yes. This was very touching. Please do more writing. I actually convinced one of my friends not to get an abortion. Again this was very touching :) 

on May. 8 2014 at 8:23 am
Goldiloxx SILVER, Lauderhill, Florida
7 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't care about anything that doesn't care about you...PERIOD.

Omg that was beautiful! !!! This was touching

on May. 7 2014 at 2:22 pm
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Thankzzzzzzzzzz @ghost

on May. 5 2014 at 3:16 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
6 articles 3 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-

I'm Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

This piece pulled at my heart strings.   Lots of emotion.           Good Work.         Keep Writing.

on May. 4 2014 at 10:24 am
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Thank you so much.

on May. 2 2014 at 11:25 am
TheRealUniverse, Nowhere, Other
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments
So powerful!!  Its quite amazing how this story is penned, I mean you really did a good job.  It touched me, and I hope to see more work such as this if not better.. Thank you!  Keep up the great writing!!!

on Apr. 24 2014 at 10:50 am
VartikaSingh GOLD, Ghaziabad, Other
13 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
One who make success without any trouble is victory, but one who make a success with lots of trouble is History.

Thanks for reading it from your heart....

on Apr. 24 2014 at 10:43 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Aww....this is beautiful! So full of emotion! It is written well, and has a powerful message! I just can't get over how much of an effect it has...great work!


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