It Hurts!

December 6, 2009
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I get up and turn over get out of bed I feel the pain shoot up through my legs I scream swears to myself because it hurts that bad. I get a drink it burns like lava going down my throat. I start to chew a piece of gum and feel this throbbing pain in my head I want to lay down and go to sleep so the pain will cease but I have to go to school. I walked off to school and I have a pain in my ears so bad it feels almost as if a train was right next to me. As I walk through the halls I see my friend talking to her boy I almost cry because my boyfriend friend broke up with me yesterday. I wish the day was over but I have to keep going at least till two forty five then I can lie down on that soft bed that feels just like air. But I have to sit at this computer with an uncomfortable chair and my butt kills and I realize that I am so hungry I could eat anything. Five minutes till lunch I can’t wait.

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Alcinous~the~XIIth said...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 3:54 pm
Thanks :)
swim4ever said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 4:35 pm
Thank You very much this was "the gravy" on top of a heart break a really hard swim break and being sick. Thank You
XenonGThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 4, 2010 at 3:25 pm
Very good! It really makes you wonder what, exactly, this pain is. Is the roken heart the sole reason for your ache, or is it just gravy on top of a much meatier pain? Very inspiring, however the grammar needs work. Other than that, fantastic. Keep writing!!! :0)
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