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The Mirage

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Epilogue

A year later Allan Carter was declared guilty and by all means, a psychopath. His sentence was prison for life for the intentional homicide of Valerie Carter and accusing his other stepdaughter of committing his crime.
When Mrs. Carter awoke from her feint the day went Marci proved herself innocent she profusely apologized to her. Eventually Marci did learn to forgive but never to forget.
Chapters:   « Previous 1 ... 9 10 11


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Freckles3 said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 5:48 pm:
Really great story, but I think it should be made a little less obvious who did it. I knew the whole time. Still, I was captivated from Chapter One on!
 
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Surobhi_Moitrayee said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 5:39 am:
Really nice please see my book too!
 
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AddieLongo said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 2:13 pm:
This is very good. I'm curious to where it's going to go. And the Marci girl...Ugh. I want to hit her. If I had a sister like that...lol You should check out my story as well :)
 
AngelFire replied...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 10:25 am :
thanks and yeah i'll check out ur story :)
 
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