The Black Blade of Betrayal

July 1, 2011
By Solei BRONZE, Sandia, TX, Texas
Solei BRONZE, Sandia, TX, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Fast, Die Young, Leave a pretty corpse


Summary:

"What is your name", the stranger asked. "Ariadne." She replied. "Saron", the stranger answered," Now if you will excuse me I believe we have a party to attend to, I have a feeling it will be very interesting.....


Tyler N.

The Black Blade of Betrayal


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on Jan. 9 2012 at 12:11 am
ILoveWritingAlot BRONZE, E, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Every end is a new beginning;
What a caterpillar calls an end the rest of the world calls a butterfly;
There never was a good war, or a bad peace.;
“People will believe anything if you whisper it.”
“Where words fail, Music speaks”

i love the name of the story...you are god gifted...keep it up! Best Regards

Solei BRONZE said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 11:38 pm
Solei BRONZE, Sandia, TX, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Fast, Die Young, Leave a pretty corpse

Thank you for the tips:). Actually this is my really old work I am currently still writing a book -_- up to page 90 and not even close to being done. I hope to finish soon and I will read your works :D but I also ask you read my poems I have here. They are not nearly as good as what I have written recently but I guess they are ok-_-

on Dec. 18 2011 at 5:48 pm
UNserieswriter, New York
0 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
idk my bff jill

p.s please read my stories The Underground Network and Roman Leagues. COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT. THANKS in advance! 

on Dec. 18 2011 at 5:46 pm
UNserieswriter, New York
0 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
idk my bff jill

obviously ending one is the best. the third one is plain ridiculous, and second isnt as strong. you started off great and only lost strength. i love all these ten little indian type things! i think you should work on greater detail, and plot setup and you'll have a great story!

your majesty said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 1:20 pm
Nice story! :P

Solei BRONZE said...
on Jul. 9 2011 at 11:45 am
Solei BRONZE, Sandia, TX, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Fast, Die Young, Leave a pretty corpse

Please rate and comment what you think of It :)

Solei BRONZE said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 3:41 am
Solei BRONZE, Sandia, TX, Texas
3 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Fast, Die Young, Leave a pretty corpse

Thank you very much :)

marigar said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 10:07 pm
Tyler N. your story was awesome, I really liked that you provided several endings for your story. It showed how creative you really were. The only thing i would change is how much description you put into it...it kind of gets the story off track but other than than i really liked your morbid metaphors and intresting use of the english literature!!!! by the way ending No. 2 was my favorite because it left me hanging(no pun intended:) for more that could happen with this ruthless killer!




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