A Day in October

January 22, 2011
By tuffylovergirl, New Berlin, Wisconsin
tuffylovergirl, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Summary:

Gathering what courage I had, I slowly stood. I took a cautious step forward feeling all eyes on me. Daren’s barbaric eyes followed my movements reverently.

“Daren, what are you doing? Why would you want to hurt innocent people who have done nothing to you? Why did you have to involve them when it’s me you want? It’s me you want to destroy!”

He came at me, and grabbing my hair at the base of my neck, yanked my head back, forcing me to look him in the eyes. Their caramel color was hard and malicious.

“Please Daren,” I begged, “Don’t kill them.”


Cherie L.

A Day in October


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haleyy. SILVER said...
on Oct. 5 2012 at 10:32 am
haleyy. SILVER, Daleville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
If you have enemies it means you fought for something in your life.
- Eminem

I absolutely LOVED this! It had me captivated and held held my attention the whole entire time I was reading! Great job!(:

on May. 2 2012 at 7:15 pm
Midnightmermaid BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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god how do you tun the pg?????

 


on Sep. 25 2011 at 6:27 pm
andromeda13 SILVER, Barrie, Other
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That was really great to read. You did a good job, and told the story perfectly.

on Aug. 12 2011 at 9:13 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

this was fantastic! i  loved your use of imagery...keep it up! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment. i would like some insight from fellow writers

Y. said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 5:07 pm
absolutly amazing it was brilliant!!!!! great job

on Jun. 7 2011 at 1:10 pm
flyinggemini GOLD, Wayne, Pennsylvania
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wow.  wow wow wow.  you are an amazing writer.  keep going because you have amazing talent.  this book literally had me on the edge of my seat.  i can relate to every single one of the characters which i have never experience before.  you have extreme talent!!!

on Apr. 24 2011 at 5:20 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

That was really good.  I love how you recount the story through flashbacks.  I personally love putting flashbacks in but I've never used them quite like you do.

summertime said...
on Jan. 31 2011 at 10:56 am
Enjoyed the style of your writing. Hope you are inspired to write more stories.

happy said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 8:33 am
captivating

chaos1 said...
on Jan. 27 2011 at 6:11 am
Nice job on getting the viewer interested in reading the book.  The sooner I can read the book, the better.


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