Life In Death

December 11, 2010
By Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"


Summary:

"I should’ve figured it would end like this, so why does it still hurt? And those eyes, they were staring at me! White and wide. I was trembling, gasping, crying for death, but Death had a better place to be.

Too many people waltz every day, waltz with the devil.
This ominous night had stars watching my torture, the slight moon was laughing at me, and the clouds tried to be a heavenly mother and cover their eyes. The wind whispered hate in my blue ears.
But there was another kind of darkness, it came from my own eyes, and that’s when light faded."


Aerolin C.

Life In Death


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This book has 32 comments.


on Jan. 9 2011 at 8:02 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

thanks so much i really apreiate it!

on Jan. 8 2011 at 10:13 pm
TheEdgar PLATINUM, Fayetteville, North Carolina
22 articles 1 photo 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you are in need of forgetting something, make a note to remember it."

LOved it. at times i thought it sounded like another story and i knew the ending beofre it happened but then i noticed that it wasnt like other stories or movies and that even though i knew the ending it was still good.

on Jan. 8 2011 at 8:18 pm
smartchick118 SILVER, Voorhees, New Jersey
5 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The coroner will find ink in my veins and blood on my typewriter keys"

Thats really awesome :)) keep on writing :))

on Jan. 8 2011 at 12:56 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
62 articles 0 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

Cool story, but it's cool to see another author from my area getting some recognition!

on Jan. 2 2011 at 7:59 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

haha i know Lucy was supposed to be short for Lucifer but it wasnt very clear....

on Dec. 30 2010 at 1:18 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

thanks so much it really means a lot :)

on Dec. 20 2010 at 9:20 pm
stickyfingers SILVER, Wake Forest, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 32 comments
Hey Aerolin, I loved your novel! I love your perspective, as opposed to other authors, that there is life in death. It makes me smile to know that someone is out there sharing that with everyone. :)

on Dec. 19 2010 at 2:11 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

thanks so much for reading it! it was originally a short story but i think your right about more of a plot :D

on Dec. 19 2010 at 2:08 pm
Aerolin PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
34 articles 19 photos 133 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fear is only in the mind"

thanks so much! it really means a lot:D

on Dec. 18 2010 at 11:39 am
stickyfingers SILVER, Wake Forest, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 32 comments
Great job! I loved the O'Henry ending!!! This book kept me up all night, not letting me sleep until I finished it. I felt truly into the book and a part of the characters - great job! :D

Lucy13 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 17 2010 at 2:57 pm
Lucy13 BRONZE, Rochester, New York
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My books are water, those of great geniuses are wine, everybody drinks water."-Mark Twain
"The writer must write what he has to say, not speak it."-Ernest Hemmingway

it's really good but,, and don't take this personally I just have to say it cuz it's actually my name, no guy goes by Lucy sorry lol i just had 2 say it other than that it's fantastic!!!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 16 2010 at 10:43 pm
XxDream_in_ColorxX SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
8 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
“It is easy to forget how full the world is of people, full to bursting, and each of them imaginable and consistently misimagined.” -John Green, Paper Towns

All I can say is- Wow! 

I love the storyline, but I think that if this is to be a novel, (unless you decided to make it a novella?) that you should elaborate more on the whole plot.  I really love this;  I'd love to see it as an actual book someday.  =D





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