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Death Before Dawn

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Death Before Dawn
Summary: “What’s that, in the water?” She gasped, pointing towards the gleaming pond.
Demetri grabbed her hand and pulled her towards it- closely followed by the smug Ashley. As they approached the pond they noticed that the thing in the pond water was a silhouette of a person.
A dead person.
Her skin was pale in the moonlight and her reddish hair twisted around her bare neck. No, it wasn’t bare. Two small, red bite marks were visible on her ashen neck.





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mystery lover said...
Feb. 9, 2012 at 4:29 pm:
i loved your book it was so amazing
 
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emilybwrites said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 2:11 pm:
fantastic! just fantastic! please check out my poem "forgotten domain" and my new poem "the others" and please comment/rate them! thanks a ton :)
 
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JonesychicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 4, 2011 at 6:39 pm:
i love this!!! keep up the good work!!! is there more!!!?????hope so!!! and will you check out my two newest books: Secrets Kept Within and Vampire Goddess??? and comment if you will please anyways please keep writing youre a really good writer keep up the great work
 
littlemisssarbear replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 5:22 am :
lWhy thank you ahaaa ;) I will have a look, of course :D umm there is a prequel to this, Ashley Novella in my stories... go ahead and read it too if you want :D xx
 
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Timekeeper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 11:30 am:

Whoa, the cover is very...striking.

 

I like this, it's darker than most of the novels here. Please keep up the good work!

 

Will you check out my novel SuperNOVA and comment on it? Thanks :D

 
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Leann13 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 6:30 pm:
Nice:) I really enjoyed it! You have quite a future in writing.
 
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