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The Real World

Cody B.
The Real World

This is a sad story but it opens up your eyes on how hard life can be. It is a action packed story but also sad

Tags: death/loss

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Apr. 24 at 8:11 pm
Hi CBond, I saw you wanted honest feedback, so here you go. I really liked the first few sentences. That really drew me in. I also loved the concept of him not basically getting over his dead wife and the consequences. The only negative feedback I'm gonna give here is two things: 1: Sometimes, the story just felt too rushed. 2: Some people can buy the "I'll sell my soul to the Devil" thing, but it can be a little cliche. I could tell Colt and Susan had a great relationship, but uniqueness is t... (more »)
CBond replied...
May 10 at 12:10 pm
thank you, i will work on the rushed parts in my next (longer book). Im basing it off the popular fan game "Five Nights at Candys" keep a look out for it.
CBond said...
Apr. 18 at 11:38 am
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