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Chapter 3

She looked up at me with hate-filled eyes that burned into my soul. I looked away, feeling the weight of her stare.

“I knew I shouldn’t have trusted you- a stranger,” she hissed.

“Well, who’s mistake is that, huh?” I countered.

“Why are you doing this?” she croaked.  Her voice had left after hours of screaming.

“Never mind that, I just need to figure out…” I stared into space, thinking. I pushed a hand through my hair.

Her face changed; a terrified look came on it, and her shoulders started to tremble slightly, “Figure out what?” she asked. I pushed a hand through my hair, working out scenarios in my head.

“How,” I half yelled in response. I felt a maniacal look cross my face. “I know.”

Tears started to drip from her eyes, before…

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Writingwizard said...
Jul. 15, 2016 at 10:21 am
Great plot twist! Suspenseful throughout!
Jelizabeth replied...
Aug. 25, 2016 at 10:59 pm
thanks! @Writingwizard

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